busboys and poets

I concur with Suzanne's first three criticisms (and up til that point have nothing else to add), but I like the Wisconsin passage. You do, however, need to insert a ...

I agree with Incandescence. This is not poetry--this is a poor attempt at being socially-aware... or something. Those of you who say it's "good" have very, very low expectations.

Thank you, Via! And not at all--that's what it's there for.

I agree with Saint; I'd like the binary code in the background more, then you in the foreground with the hand. And I don't really see the need for that ...

o_O O_o I'll stick with my thesaurus, thank you. ^_^ Brava, though!

Thanks! The idea behind the dandelion was that you blow dandelion seeds to make a wish--therefore the seeds are a symbol for wishes/imagination, and they're blowing across the page. Lol. ...

The size is a little awkward, yes, but it's my first try. Have mercy. I kid, I kid--tear it apart, please. Let me know what I can improve upon! I'm ...

Thank you both! Far more complimentary than I expected. =) My question to you is now--which parts should be trimmed or adjusted? I agree that it does become 'ungrounded,' but ...

all you lovers of time, join in the streets! come with your bangles and pockets and your verdigris roofs to claim your rightful due. this is not the end for ...

Might it be a 'stand' of trees? *ponders* I'm not sure. But in any event, these photos are lovely! I'm not a big fan of snow, but I have to ...

These are simply gorgeous, inks. Favorites include--well, most of them, actually. No point in listing them. ^_^ I particularly liked "Blood Haunts The Prisoner" and "I Write Therefore I Am," ...

Nice! This does look very good. I mean, there are of course little things that could be improved--but taken holistically, this is a fantastic piece. I agree that the wings ...

Rocky's very good! And Waver is perfect--I sort of want a stuffed version to hang inside my door. =) These would look a lot better with color, or at least ...

They remind me of The Velveteen Rabbit. =) I'd say #2, though there are a few (very minor) issues with proportion. Otherwise, these are adorable and fuzzy and make me ...

1. This is the best of the bunch. It's a little on the dark side still, but I love the colors--almost bruise-like, yes? Absolutely perfect. 2. While it's a lovely ...